She's not a poet, but does she have to be? She comes to the reading to read the poems of her recently dead husband, for she made a vow: that she would read his work at an open mic. Now she is keeping her word. It's her way of keeping him alive or maybe it's his way of keeping her alive.
She stumbles over his words—not out of grief perhaps but because they're not assembled in her rhythm, and they're not her words. She limps along to the end of the small batch of poems she brought.
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It's over. Well, that's done. She got through it. She sits down to polite applause. She takes a breath to calm herself. She doesn't weep outwardly, but neither does she leave. As another poet walks to the mic, she pretends to listen.
There's no end of poets wanting to read, no end of reasons for wanting to read one's own poetry out loud in front of a crowd.
The words wash over her; they do not penetrate her skin. She tries to enter the poem, but there's no situation she can put herself in, no story she can latch onto. It's all just an unconnected series of phrases she doesn't really care about.
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She concentrates on bringing her husband back into her mind, to have him appear before her, but he' s just an angry ghost now and refuses to appear. Her memory is just not strong enough to hold him in its arms. As in Homer, as in Virgil, as in every writer who has tried to describe this phenomenon, he just slips away and she is left in the moonlight staring at her hands.
She thinks to herself, “What is that person at the podium saying?” She asks herself what she's still doing there. She could be home doing nothing until she went to bed. Until tomorrow, that empty terror, came around. What was that line in Dodsworth? Jesus, she just watched the film on TCM. She tries and fails to recall it. Then, after a minute of hard concentrating, she remembers:
"Love has got to stop someplace short of suicide."
She was stopped short when she heard Walter Huston say that to Mary Astor in the film. "Love has got to stop someplace short of suicide," he said. What did that mean? What was he trying to say? She wasn't sure, but she was glad she remembered it so she could keep thinking about it. She repeats it to herself as if it were a mantra.
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Maybe she should try writing herself. How hard could it be? These people were all pretending to be writers. Why shouldn't she pretend also? I'll put that Dodsworth line in my poem, she thinks. Maybe begin with that line. Or maybe end with that line. Or maybe have it appear right in the middle. Or maybe it should be the title of the poem. She decides she'll think more about it.
She looks up, looks around. Everyone, necks craned forward, is listening intently. She stares at the ceiling of the bookstore. She begins to work on her unwritten poem, a poem she decides to dedicate to her husband. He'll like that I'm writing a poem. He'll like that I'm dedicating it to him, she thinks. "Love has got to stop someplace short of suicide." Someplace short of suicide. That's it! That's the title! She smiles. Around her, the open mic creaks solipsistically to its end.
What a wonderful story. I know her; I also know the feeling of pretending to listen. This sentence sure made me smile: "There's no end of poets wanting to read"--so true (and, darn it, I'm one of those without end). *
There is no more hellish place for me than an audience for anything I've written, spoken aloud. Perish the thought. I did it once by invitation - an English summer circuit. Excrutiating! Care to read mine Beate... feel free :-))
As for love having to stop short of suicide... my response would be a book x
This one Bill, will stay quite the while I suspect.
I fear coming unglued reading anything I've written aloud to strangers. So, even tho I love the Dodsworth quote and how it gave "her" hope,the line that stays with me is at the beginning: "She stumbles over his words...because they're not assembled in her rhythm, and they're not her words."
Funny thing is I love to read aloud the words and rhythms of other writers.
Reading aloud in public is good for the soul. I always get nervous, and I've done it hundreds of times. You do get better at it, I assure you. And it is always a rush. *
Thank you, Beate, Amantine, Matt, and Jerry, for the excellent comments!
While I haven't seen the movie or read the novel, I have read Nora Joyce's apt quote from that era: "Being married to a writer is a very hard life."
Good work!
"She's not a poet, but does she have to be?"
Bill, you have captured so much with these words, this piece. Memories, ghosts, the writer's life.*
Excellent.
Thank you, Edward, Tim, and Gary!
Love this full circle. So well done. Bravo!
Thank you, Dianne!
Nice stage play, Bill. You really get to the heart of the matter: how do we cope when coping is all that's left to do? Begs to be read aloud.
Thanks, Darryl!
Excellent, Bill. Really captures the scene and the emotions.
Thank you, Daniel!
"Maybe she should try writing herself. How hard could it be? These people were all pretending to be writers. Why shouldn't she pretend also?"
A fine piece, Bill. A dark pleasure to read. I like.
Hi, Sam! Nice to see you here again!
Thanks for your comment and support of this piece!
"She could be home doing nothing until she went to bed."
I love how the setting of the open mic becomes a fertile ground for the character's own achieving.
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Thank you, Ann!