She didn't have the courage or the talent, or the opportunity or trust that anyone would catch her, so she remained on the ground with all her sequined dreams, just as many of her neighbors do, among the roses covered in snow that floats down sideways, among the illustrated fairy tales, the chiffon wrapped desires. She notices in stories no one ever bothers to revive the dragon. This worries her as junipers cast shadows on her eyes. She thinks of waterfalls she will likely never see, of music she might love but may not get to hear, and always, of course, of the tempting trapeze.
She does trust the forest with its secrets, shrubs, shadows, needles, leaves, its poetry of frost, where nobody is jealous and still everyone's destiny gets done. Solitude is such an excellent alternative to suicide. When she is alone, she is not wrong. She wants to prove to the world how beautiful it is, though she expects the world already knows this. She is that excited. Glistening grass, deer wandering by, a daylight owl. Suddenly the future opens its inevitable arms.
Glorious, Gloria!*
"When she is alone, she is not wrong."
I really enjoyed this piece. It is very moving. *
Great shift in emotions. Good work, Beate. I like it.
"She does trust the forest with its secrets, shrubs, shadows, needles, leaves, its poetry of frost, where nobody is jealous and still everyone's destiny gets done."
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" she remained on the ground with all her sequined dreams..."
I see them sparkle.*
Beautiful and powerful *
Sic transit, Gloria Mundi.
I do hope she keeps coming back.
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* rich with imagery!
Lush and lovely.
Thank you, friends, for your comments and faves. I'm still enchanted with those inevitable arms.
Rhythmic and powerful, and like the forest, this narrative contains many beautiful secrets of its own.
Esp loved the line, "Solitude is such an excellent alternative to suicide."
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*I found this at just the right time; this ushers in thru morning light, a great sense of hope
Lyrical prose, compact, intense, rippling with potent images of life, death and change.
Thank you, Javed, Rabbit, and David!
Really enjoyed this, Beate. Love the feeling it left in me *