Thanks, David. You're right about "And so it goes." I read it and found it's more like a novel outline. I took it down and will mark it a failed experiment.
Hi David, thank you for your feedback on "Hotel Chelsea - Intercut 5 - the talisman". The story is part of a larger work, which I'm posting pretty much as I write it; "the talisman" should not be read as a story in itself, starting in medias res. Your reader response is noted and appreciated.
Don't worry about New York - you'll do much better than X.
David. I have a tip for you. You're doing just fine. I will now read your writing. When I am finished I will think, "he's doing just fine."
Welcome to fictionaut.
Thanks, David. You're right about "And so it goes." I read it and found it's more like a novel outline. I took it down and will mark it a failed experiment.
Hi David, thank you for your feedback on "Hotel Chelsea - Intercut 5 - the talisman". The story is part of a larger work, which I'm posting pretty much as I write it; "the talisman" should not be read as a story in itself, starting in medias res. Your reader response is noted and appreciated.
Don't worry about New York - you'll do much better than X.
No problem for the comment; I thoroughly enjoyed the story! I'm in Auburn, AL right now...a teaching gig.
Thanks for the read and the feedback; they are much appreciated.
Thanks so much for your kind comment! I'm not having a lot of confidence in the potential project, so hearing that is very encouraging.
Sigur Ros is also lovely, spooky stuff. I'm looking forward to reading what you're doing as well!
David. I have a tip for you. You're doing just fine. I will now read your writing. When I am finished I will think, "he's doing just fine."
Welcome to fictionaut.
David, thanx for your comments on "A Necessary Evil". I commented on your comment on the storys wall.
Really enjoyed both your pieces and their corresponding notes.
Hi David,
Welcome to Fictionaut!