by Rene Foran
you knew the light
bent it in your favor
leapt confidently
across hearts
cheeks and shoulders
rouged chromatic
incandescent
pretending
perhaps the dark
had no claim
over your lonely
clumsy soul
© 2013 - Rene
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"your lonely clumsy soul"
Yes. *
Clumsy is a strong choice to close. Works well. Good piece.
Nice. and I'm glad I read Sam's comment. He's right.
thank you all :)
Great beginning too.