Counter intuit
by Mathew Paust
All there is
Really
Is I
I I I I I
Then comes
Thee
Inevitably
I first then Thee
The fortunate
Progress
To
We
Not just
I and Thee
But truly
We
Ultimately
To save the I
We all must be
We
by Mathew Paust
All there is
Really
Is I
I I I I I
Then comes
Thee
Inevitably
I first then Thee
The fortunate
Progress
To
We
Not just
I and Thee
But truly
We
Ultimately
To save the I
We all must be
We
I like the form, the simplicity, the minimalism.
*, Mathew. Truth spoken clearly via inspirational verse.
Yes.
The more I read this, the more carefully I read this, the more I like it.
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Agree with we.
Good reminder in a this fractured, self-involved moment*
Pretty heavy ofr breakfast, but it makes a good point well. Cheerio! *
Thanks, friends. Glad it worked for you. It just sort of popped out.
I like the confusion of the I and the We and it leads to the question that maybe neither exists.
Fortunately, I'm pretty sure I have tapeworms, so we are covered. *
IIII like it. *
We *