“Better to see the land of your ancestors,” he said. “Besides, we're in no hurry.”
But I was in a hurry.
“See? North.” He pointed to the compass, smiling. “So rest. And trust me to get us to our destination.”
I closed my eyes. He was right, trust and rest; the chemo had robbed me of all my energy. The sun strobed through the birch forest, flinging dappled warmth on my cheeks. The crumpled map slid to the floor.
When I woke, the clock said eight at night but the sky looked like mid-afternoon. Chris rolled down the windows. Wind pummeled me awake, smelling of pine and some quality of freshness, of newness, I could not identify. He hummed softly and kept patting my knee.
“Almost there,” he said.
The trees thinned. I wanted to sleep more, but Chris cut the engine.
“Where are we?”
He helped me from the car. My hips ached. I leaned against him. Pine needles blanketed the ground. Then, the woods ended and sky spread before us, a never-ending canvas of liquid silver that melted into water, blue as his eyes, as blue as our daughter's, now grown.
He squeezed my hand. “We are exactly where we need to be.”
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Inspired by memories of Finland and the 52/250 theme: lost in translation.
I'm posting this while flying from New Orleans to Baltimore -- isn't technology wonderful?
Happy Thanksgiving.
Linda, I'm happy to be the first to post on this exquisite little jewel of a story. Happy Thanksgiving to you across the skies...
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“We are exactly where we need to be.”
Great ending.
Bill said it, but I'll repeat, Great ending.
Glad to see this here. It's a beatiful life-affirming moment. *
Happy Thakdgiving.
Thanks Susan for the sweet words and fav -- and Happy Thanksgiving to you! Peace...
The details in this are exceptional and make this story really come to life. Perfect ending.
Bill and James -- thanks for liking my ending -- they are the hardest to put down. Peace...
Kim, thanks for the read and the fav -- much appreciated! Peace...
Christian, thank you *
Happy thanksgiving. Peace...
How beautiful is that?"..the woods ended and sky spread before us, a never-ending canvas of liquid silver that melted into water, blue as his eyes, as blue as our daughter's, now grown."
Susan said it: a jewel.*
I like this blue and silver place, "the sun strobing through the birch forest."I like the way that hurry settles into rest. Nice.
Great story, great read. Thank you.
I join the ones who love the ending. Great piece throughout, too.
Thanks DP for the very kind words and the fav -- yippee! Peace...
Thanks Carol, Jules and Beate for your reads and comments -- very much appreciated! Happy thanksgiving! Peace...
Linda, yes, we are where we are supposed to be, but at times we don't realise it until later. Trust is the key word here, and in this story. Loved it! Happy thanksgiving to you too. Wish we had it in Australia!Fav.
Yes, indeed, great ending. An outstanding story.
Thanks Myra for the kind words and fav! And hey, roast yourself a turkey anyway -- good for a week of fine eats! Peace...
Matt, thanks for reading and the little star! Peace...
"strobed" - a great word nestled among many great lines.