Two days after the baby died, Jeremiah got his shovel and began to dig in the front of the house facing the fields. The morning marked twenty-nine days with no rain and the ground was dry as rock. The shovel hit schist. Sparks filled the hole. Almost six feet, Jeremiah reckoned, almost deep enough. Dust filled his mouth, a fine chalky yellow when he spit. At least his eyes didn't burn—he couldn't shovel with tears, not in this heat.
He felt Sheila watch from the bedroom window. The steady sound of shoveling for the past three hours would have woken her, should have made her come to the window, but when he looked up to wipe the sweat from his forehead, the window remained dark.
One more shovelful of earth. Enough. He pulled himself from the hole and perched on the edge. The box, hand hewn in cedar, and the sapling, balled in burlap, laid at the field's edge. Two days ago, when they had returned from the hospital, after Jeremiah had placed the casket in the storm cellar where the air stayed cool and Sheila had gone upstairs and locked herself into their room, Jeremiah had gone down to the creek and dug up the river birch.
He looked up to the window. The curtain did not move. Jeremiah picked up the casket and lowered it into the hole. He jumped in and positioned the box to make it level. He pulled himself out from the grave. In the field, he picked stems of soft wheat straw, still green, and purple bugle that smelled of mint, and Queen Anne's lace and daisies, and fashioned a bouquet of sorts. He laid the flowers on top of the casket.
The first handful of dirt made a clinking sound when it rained on the box. He reached into his jeans and pulled out a guitar pick, the one he had used the night Sheila started to bleed. He dropped that in, too. Then Jeremiah shoveled the dirt into the hole, fast and hard, and when the earth obscured the wood, he dropped to his knees, and cried. The curtain in the house stayed still.
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love it linda. great writing, very evocative sense of place and time. beautiful.
I'm loving what the book is becoming. Keep writing.
The physicality of this, the earth, and the sapling, and even the guitar pick play so well with the gravity of the narrative. Thanks.
Good piece.
I like the voice - "One more shovelful of earth. Enough. He pulled himself from the hole and perched on the edge. The box, hand hewn in cedar, and the sapling, balled in burlap, laid at the field's edge."
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Jame C, thanks for the generous comment--much appreciated! peace...
James Lloyd, thank you. I am having so much fun with this book, I am so in love with my characters--even the antagonists! Peace...
Steven, thank you for your super comment and the fave. When he drops in that guitar pick, he stops playing for a long, long time. Peace...
Sam, thank you for the fave and, most of all, grooving on Jeremiah's voice. I like it, too--a good thing, I gotta live with it for awhile. peace...
Masterful writing. Great scene. *
Frost's "Home Burial" immediately came to mind as I read this, Linda. Your prose rendering of a similar scene is well done.*
Starkly beautiful and so sad. Wonderful writing. *
Wonderful details--like Joani I also thought of "Home Burial," though I haven't read it in many years. The death of a child, though, isn't something you forget--in poetry as in life.*
Thank you all for reading, generous words, and pretty stars--so appreciated! Peace...
Jane and JP, I have not read Home Burial but am off to seek it out. Thanks so much. Peace...
Conveyed mood so well. I loved the use of repetitive references to Sheila locked in the house, behind the window and curtain. "the curtain did not move." Excellent.