This is my dad at the breakfast table. He's leaning towards my brother, Den, like he's telling Den a secret except his voice is plenty loud enough for Mom and me to hear. Den has asked Dad to explain why all the trees in town are dying.
Dad says that when the hot wind blows it gets the trees swaying and whispering to each other. "That's all it is, boy. Trees gossiping, spreading disease." He smiles at Mom. "Isn't that right, baby?" He used to call her Constance, but this summer he has started calling her "baby." I don't know why.
And this is my mom. She's got a paisley kerchief wrapped around a head full of pink curlers and she's wearing lipstick even though it is only breakfast. She drinks black coffee from a green mug that shows a leaping deer and the words "Nothing runs like a Deere" on it.
"Aren't you the poet this morning, Ray!" She laughs. I swear I smell the scent of Tide out her red mouth. "Whispering trees, that's sweet. Really."
I can't eat for the whine of chain saws. We've got a hundred-year old elm tree of our own right outside our house. There's an archway of elm trees that blocks the sky the whole length of our street. The chain saws sound like they are three, maybe four blocks away.
Den has stopped listening. He's scooping forkfuls of scrambled eggs like yellow brains into his mouth. He is twelve, two years older than I am.
Dad's working his teeth over with a pick, watching Mom.
"Gossip kills, doesn't it baby?" Something about his voice makes me feel dizzy. I grip the edge of my chair.
Mom's looking at the paper. Just looking at it. Dad gets up to leave.
"Don't trip over your lunch pail, Poet," she says.
Around town, cut logs lay scattered like bones. Den and his friends like to walk Indian style across the logs, one foot in front of the other, stretching their arms out at their sides for balance. I sit watching them in the shadow of our school. The new, huge sky wants to swallow me. I try not to look at it. I like the feel of concrete beneath me, of bricks against my back.
A man is singing "Come on baby light my fire" over my transistor radio. I turn up the volume and push my bangs off my forehead. The boys are playing follow-the-leader now. Den calls over his shoulder we'll go home in five minutes. I focus my attention on his sneakers flying over the dead limbs.
I don't tell Den anything anymore. Not since I let it slip that I had trouble with gravity and he'd gone straight to Mom and told her. She felt my forehead and wanted me to explain, but how could I?
It was the day Sister William stood Leonard Tucker up at the front of the class for blowing raspberries during "The Battle Hymn of the Republic." She ordered him to recite the Five Glorious Mysteries and when he couldn't she whacked him on the back of his head with those toady hands of hers. I had felt suddenly lighter and next thing I knew I was watching Leonard Tucker and Sister William from somewhere near the ceiling. I saw myself, too, at my desk, holding my songbook out in front of me like everyone else.
Dad had come into my room after work, smelling like the hot metal shavings under his skin and explained to me all about Gravity like a Poet, which meant I didn't understand a single word. I knew that Gravity did not "hug me close to Mother Earth" all the time as apparently it did everyone else. I nodded to make him smile, but I learned after that to curl my toes in tightly when I walked and to sit heavily in chairs.
On Mullan Avenue, it is cooler and darker. I scan the tallest branches of the trees and see a scattering of brown leaves. I drop down at the foot of the elm tree that stands in front of our house. I see my mom through the windows, moving about her work, her hair still in curlers. The scent of Tide blows out the dryer vent and rises and blends with the hot breeze. I discover that trees really do whisper but I don't know what they are trying to tell me.
Soon, my father appears around the corner swinging his lunch pail. His face is long. I decide not to run to him. I press my bottom hard to the ground beneath our elm tree. The men with the chain saws will come soon. I will wait for them.
The death of the elms was the tragedy of the time, and is beautifully used here as metaphor to underline the narrator's weightlessness, the general impermanence of the things you count on. An artul piece with deep resonance.
Great piece, Kathy.
"I can't eat for the whine of chain saws. We've got a hundred-year old elm tree of our own right outside our house. There's an archway of elm trees that blocks the sky the whole length of our street. The chain saws sound like they are three, maybe four blocks away."
Change/loss is a powerful focus in the story. Wonderful writing.
David and Sam, thank you so much.
Couldn't have chosen a more potent metaphor for this Midwest kid. More word magic from K.F.
Hey, Jack, I'm a Midwest kid myself...thanks for reading this.
oh that hot wind, love all the angles you're working here - and what excellent characterization and dialogue to boot. A Kathy Fish story never disappoints. *****
There is so much to note here. I particularly love the concepts of gravity's lapsed attention.
Beautifully expressed.
Thank you, Julie & James!
Excellent dialogue and characters in this. Beyond solid writing and storytelling, as always, Kathy!
Christian, thank you!
"I smell the scent of Tide out her red mouth"
"The new, huge sky wants to swallow me."
"toady hands"
"I discover that trees really do whisper but I don't know what they are trying to tell me."
I love reading good writing. Very nice job, Kathy!
Thanks, Bill!
Wonderful 10 year old's voice here, thoughtful, expressive, and perfectly pitched. Love the layers of stories hinted at which remain untold. *
Beautiful detail in the images, and all from the clear-eyed perspective of a 10-year-old. I love that she doesn't even trust gravity.
Great story, Kathy. *
Thanks Cherise and Kim for such lovely comments and faves for this old story!
The trees, the wind, the gravity… and I love this narrator. Great title too. *
Thank you, Kari! I'm glad you like this!
Kathy there is a lot of sensitivity in your stories, and this one is no exception. You are able to access deep, and we get to live with them a while which feels really good. I love the poetry to this piece, its cryptic qualities and the realness of it all
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Susan, thank you. This is one of my first written stories. I'm so happy to know you like it.
One of your first written stories? Jeez... it's immaculate, and for such an early one. Well I am impressed
A finely wrought paean of sadness. I barely remember the elms. Thanks.
Thanks kindly, Larry!
This is gorgeous. I love it...especially the first part, detailing/introducing the family. *
Oh, Jules, you're kind. Thanks for reading & faving this one too!
such a wonderful story about those whispering trees to each other. Great story.
Estelle, thank you!
Love the narrator's voice in this piece - very clear and believable.
Thank you kindly, Pamela!
I thought I was watching a play while reading this. Great details. *
Oh, I appreciate your finding this one and reading and commenting, Daniel!