There is a scene in a movie
where the heroine runs away to a shore motel
for a few days respite,
no television, phone, newspaper, humans,
just the sound of waves lapping on the shore
as she drifts in and out of sleep wrapped in white sheets,
the salt water infused in the air she breathes.
The woman leaves behind home, husband, children,
floating between what's real and imagined,
she succumbs to the dark side for a time,
eventually returning a bit damaged but withstanding.
Yet it seemed to me this creature
was ill-fitted to her life from the start.
She was a moon dancer, keeper of secrets,
a spinner of tales, an adventurer, a dreamer,
stifled by the confines of a June Cleaver life.
I envied her brief episode to the far shore,
wanted her to linger,
to become a woman made of
ocean, sand, salt and air,
eyes of ocean green washed pebbles,
hair of flaxen seaweed sweeping behind her
erasing footsteps so none could find her.
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On escaping one's life.
ooooh... i love this poem. it gave me goosebumps on my scalp
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A delightful escape... •
Another take on the same woman running to a beach is Edna Pontellier in Kate Chopin's The Awakening. Alas, she doesn't return.
"She was a moon dancer, keeper of secrets, / a spinner of tales, an adventurer, a dreamer"
Nice.
yes, the confines of a June Cleaver life. How awful for women.
So true Judith
I really admire the way you set this up, the way the narrator and the protagonist are related. So little said; so much implied. *
Lovely comments from all. Much appreciated.
"to linger,
to become a woman made of
ocean, sand, salt and air."
Lovely poem. I like it a lot. *
This feels so familiar. It's haunting. I want to say it feels like there are bystanders on the beach, watching, chanting 'stay ... stay ... stay," but it's probably just the rhythmic shushing of the waves.
Beautiful. *
A lot of life in this Still Life. Such a story. *
Kim & Jane,
Thank you so much for commenting.
James,
Love your reaction, a poem in itself.
Wonderful, enticing work.*