“. . . he who is not afraid of my darkness, will find banks full of roses under my cypresses." Nietzsche
If I am a dark forest whose night
lives deep into the day, turning
the swamp black and still for
the alligator to lie in wait, coaxing
fireflies to out glow the absent stars,
why have I allowed beasts, magic
and brave, to curl on the moss
and water roots, rest high
in the canopy of thick leaves?
He who is not afraid of my darkness
may find roses. He who must plant
the flowers may soon retreat to light.
Why do people equate long poems with masterpieces? Emily Dickinson is a great poet and she wrote nothing but short poems.
Of course, there is the cumulative effect.
I prefer the short ones because of my affliction: ADD. Doesn't mean I like all short ones, but I do like this one. *
Love the closing. ***
Thanks, everyone. Dickinson wrote epics with four lines.
I'll echo that the brevity works well here. It feels complete.
Perfect.*
Thanks, Emily and Amanda
Excellent antidote to April and all that budding green and the mad dash of squirrels.
Love that last line. And the one before it echoing the quote. I love it all.
Thanks Gary and Emily
sometimes I am a dark forest.*
Me too, Tim
Love where you've taken that quote.*
Thanks, Gary
*, John. I like this...a lot.
Thanks, David
Forces the reader to reflect- turn inward. Fine work.
Thanks, Sam
Very good work John!
Thanks, Meg
Such an interesting take on Nietzsche, John! That opening line ("If I am a dark forest"...) opens up worlds.
Thanks, Bill
Majestic - one of those poems any honest poet will admit to being jealous of. ;)
*Whew. Straight to my heart, here.
Thanks, Neil and Nonnie