by Jamey Genna
People disappeared in the 70's—young girls, teenagers, they always said they ran away. Nobody really believed that the next-door neighbor was capable of that kind of horror. These two girls disappeared and the police had been digging up the farm of this one family for two months. Thirty-five years later, some guy in prison said something and they had a lead, so they were lifting up the machine shed and they found a purse and some bones, but the police hadn't revealed what kind of bones they were yet—animal or human. It was quite likely they were animal bones, and old purses and bureaus often end up in machine sheds in the Midwest.
This other teenager had a baby and she put it in a garbage bag and threw it away. It was unclear whether the baby was dead when she put it in the garbage bag. She wouldn't say. The girl's boyfriend somehow lost his job because of her actions, and the police were looking for the baby's body in the dump up in Worthington. The girl tried to say she'd put the baby up for adoption in Sioux Falls at the Center for Adoption, but they, the parents of the boy—the boy was a man—the parents asked her about it and then they went up there to find out about it and there was no record of it, so then the girl admitted. She said no one would help her.
Nobody was here to help me, she said.
She admitted that she had thrown the baby away, that she had put the baby . . . . She said, I put it in a bag, and then they said, what kind of a bag, and she pointed to the sink cupboard, and they thought she meant it was under the sink still, and they looked and there was a box of Glad bags, the dark green kind. She was unable to say garbage.
The people in the town were angry that the police hadn't put her in jail yet. Why did they keep digging up that farm for those two missing girls from the 70's? Why did they keep digging in that family's yard? The man was in prison already for 215 years for raping and murdering someone else a long time ago.
They found the baby at the dump in Worthington. They had to sort through all the garbage. They had to close the dump. They didn't think there was a chance in hell that they would find it. Everyone was praying, everyone who read the newspaper was praying that the poor dead baby would be found. The deputies were praying.
Then, one day during the search, the deputy found a strange note—it was scribbled on an envelope.
The baby is here, it said, or it said, look here for the baby.
That's what they said it said. The winter was a long one, mild in December, but during January—the wind chill factor kicked in.
Look for the baby here, it said.
So the deputy went back and looked in a place he hadn't planned to look or that he had already gone through and the baby was right there!
Why hadn't they put that girl in jail yet? Why didn't they do anything about her? Why not leave those poor people on that farm alone. Stop digging up their land. That family has suffered enough.
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This story was published in the print magazine Blue Earth Review. It didn't win their flash fiction contest, but they wanted to publish it anyway. It's based on a phone call with my mother in Iowa.
Wow, I can see why Blue Earth wanted to publish this. Very strong and ends perfectly.
Chill factor indeed. Knifes the heart.
I like how news reports and news as a topic of conversation mix in this story. The story is Midwestern-dark. One can feel the farms in the background. The murmured disagreement seems between the farm people and law enforcement. The story raises questions, such as, what do the farm people think about abortion, and are the disappeared teenaged girls worth the community's long-term sympathy in light of what the other teenagers did?
Thanks for your comments, you guys. Yes--this story definitely reminds me of Midwestern views on abortion, Anne.
This is so for me. The 2nd to last paragraph just kills me.
Gee thanks, Laura. I'm all for the exclamation point. Breaking the rules.
I love this. Great ending!
I agree with everyone. This is a great story! A definite favorite for me.
I really like how this explores victimhood -- how degrees are established and justified. The baby is more of a victim than the disappeared girls, who are more victims than the girl, who is villified though she is arguably the most significant victim, being still alive and having apparently been refused help when she needed it.
I also really like your description of how the note was worded.
Great story. Look forward to reading more!
Thanks, Lauren. "Villified"--that's a good word.
I love the voice here, the conversational snippets, the reportage, the outrage, all processed together like some literary pesto.
Interesting mix of the two tales. It has the feel of being a conversation transferred to print--its logic. Nice stuff.
What's fun is making that conversation into an exaggerated version of itself.
Very strong. Wind chill indeed! The back and forth from the shed to the dump is evocative and keeps up the suspense. No wonder they wanted to publish it.
Hey, Jamey! This absolutely rocks, a complex and entirely fulfilling read.
Hey Meg, Gee thanks. I still get a kick out of this story. Midwest gossip. Whoo hoo.
Startling and I really like the tone of the narration. Excellent piece.
Thanks, Katrina. I don't know why people like this one so much. I think it's the title.
This is a great read. Very Strong sense of place here. The form works. Well written piece.