by DJ Young
Morning crooks over a soot-covered sill
looking like a millstone fresh from the mill.
There really isn't much to see.
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
Work and play and I forget the rest
means nothing at all when you're 27th best.
Or the fifty-first. Or four hundred and seventy-three.
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
Hair loss, weight loss, last minute's style
everything goes thin and tatty after a while.
What does it matter when you're small as a flea?
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
Tramp in the weeds, tramping the lawn,
the world feels shifty when you've been put-upon
(and everywhere you step, someone's had a wee)
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
The sun over there can go h
a
n
g itself.
These books look better in dust on the shelf.
The moon's a teabag sunk in a radium-colored sea.
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
I'll write trite verses a penny a line
and sell them to you for a diamond mine.
Then I'll blow up the mine with a thousand pounds of TNT.
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
Shred all the letters and rip the arms off the clocks
choke every dog on his leash and take a piss off the public docks.
Make an ass of myself. And a mess the world would pay to see.
The one that I love - doesn't love me.
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A little light verse.
Nice nod to Auden. Very well versed.
The sun over there can go h
a
n
g itself.
These books look better in dust on the shelf.
The moon's a teabag sunk in a radium-colored sea.
I love this DJ. And the strong rhymes. "*"
Lite like hell. Each refrain hurt a little more than the last. I like the pacing and the visuals. *
Brilliant wordplay.*
Thank you all for reading and taking the time to comment. :-)
"Hair loss, weight loss, last minute's style
everything goes thin and tatty after a while."
Good poem. *
I want to put this to music. This is a fine poem and would make a great song, I think. I may do that, and credit you at my next small gig. Is that cool? Man, this is the hammer and the nail.
"The moon's a teabag sunk in a radium-colored sea."
loved that line DJ, simply loved it
M x