I think I remember now why people write poetry.
It's for the times
when the thoughts
are coming
so fast and furious
punch you in the face
jet pack
jelly brain
instant inject
instant noodles
that regular sentences just won't do.
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Pretty much.
naw, can't be it.
think it's for the fame, but mostly the fortune.
Enough fortune to buy the instant noodles, at least for the few lucky ones. Punchy alliteration in this piece, though. Nice one.
Captures an aspect very well.
Thoughts that punch one in the face. Yes. Good piece.
Yup.
*
Slow down. Take a deep breath. Is this so? I didn't know that. *
Thanks all, for the comments and the likes... :) I really appreciate the feedback!
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