by Deborah Oster Pannell
I think I remember now why people write poetry.
It's for the timeswhen the thoughts are comingso fast and furiouspunch you in the facejet packjelly brain instant injectinstant noodlesthat regular sentences just won't do.
The author has not attached a note to this story.
naw, can't be it.
think it's for the fame, but mostly the fortune.
Enough fortune to buy the instant noodles, at least for the few lucky ones. Punchy alliteration in this piece, though. Nice one.
Captures an aspect very well.
Thoughts that punch one in the face. Yes. Good piece.
Slow down. Take a deep breath. Is this so? I didn't know that. *
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