Pen Pals
by David James
Sitting together at Starbucks, we composed a long love letter which we've been mailing back and forth to each other, signing our name upon each receipt and returning it for the last nine months and it has grown to eighty seven pages, barely fitting in a shoe box.
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Playing around trying to write one sentence stories.
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Sweet Jesus, but that must be one helluva love affair! *
Not sure why the "but" in previous comment.
I like it.
(maybe "as" in place of "and" in "and it has grown")
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Mathew, Paekakariki Otarahunga, and Sam, thanks for reading this tiny story. And, Paekakariki Otarahunga, with your name, I think i see two "one word" stories.
I love to write letters. Couldn't send the same one over & over. No no no. *
Sweet.
Short but moving.*
Always fun to explore the limits of a single sentence. Well done.
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I like the shoebox detail. Adds depth, and a question or two.
I like the shoebox detail. Adds depth, and a question or two.
Nine months, eh? Starbucks = shoe box.
Nice.
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