by Bill Yarrow
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This poem originally appeared in WRENCH (erbacce-press, 2009).
It was republished in THIS Literary Magazine.
The poem appears in Pointed Sentences (BlazeVOX, 2012).
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Wonderful imagery, Bill. And form. Great closing.
Hommage in spirit and text worthy of him. The use of simile to supply a refrain and astonishing metaphors at once is really masterful.
Nice similes. Like the metaphor, too. And the form. Great job, all in all. Fav.
Wonderful phrasing, memorable lines.
Gorgeous, and haunting. As it should be.
Excellent poetry, like the brain waves of a seer.
Very visual and I like all the likes (similes)*
stunning similies . . . fave
..like the lips of lovers who no longer kiss..these images you've created stay and chat, then linger and stroll along with the reader.
Perfect! fav
Happy to give this its 10th *.
Beautiful.
Haunting indeed. Specially the last lines where the poet returns to the place Rimbaud died.