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Striking. I like the levels of language and form - what is and is not the case. The piece is a good fit for Moria. A fine poem, Bill. *

Playful subversion.

Great rhythmic echoes in this one.

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I really liked the playfulness of form with the emotional weight of the words.

Clever play on words here.

This was highly amusing... that doesn't sound right. Hmmm. I got a kick out of this.

This was highly amusing... that doesn't sound right. Hmmm. I got a kick out of this.

*, Bill. Such a delight to read. Your keen, unique humor here is so well expressed.

Wow. You got a draw. I lose most of the time. Fav.

Superb!

I feel like this poem addresses a concern in the theory world, which is how to incorporate things that don't have words for them. I can see why Moria took this.*

Thanks, Sam, Gary, Matt, Alba, Susan, Steven, David, Jake, Mia, and Amanda, for reading and commenting!

Nice Oulipolian poem.

nice word play, fun to read.

Thanks, Daniel and Clark! Appreciate your reading and responding!