by xTx!
He will be happy with clean sheets when he gets home so
she does that and he thanks her as
he slides
in between them and
the four thighs
of the two girls as
she watches from the chaise
he gave her on their
Crystal Anniversary
She will admire his finesse
as his earnestness tears apart
their young flesh
with rabid ferocity
scaring her into four powerful
orgasms that echo
his
Paid and laid, they leave.
They fuck in the shower and
afterwards he helps her
into that black dress
because the doorbell should ring soon
once if the men are punctual
twice if they are not
The next day
at the office the
post-Valentine's Day
competition
begins.
The ladies parade their new glitterings
their tales of crystal glasses, champagne
roses and
when her turn comes she says,
“Oh, you know, the usual…”
and with the wisdom they have of
her heavy burden of
matrimonial years they
count
her out
of the running
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Strong & sexy & edgy poem with a great ending
Pretty sly. LOVE the ending!
Sensual and kinky,and yet I sense that smirk in her own little secret. Nice.
YUM.
bang
That *was* fun and funny.
outstanding. yes, sexy, sly and anchoring the events in home and office works so well.
Thanks people!!!! xoxoxx
Enjoyed this piece. Such a strong ending.
Delicious.
BAM POW
Just read it again. Regret nothing.
matt, you are my fairy godmother.
you stole a peek into my life. nice.
This is fierce and excellent and so well paced. I see a lot of sophistication here and I like it.
That's searing. And a great ending.
Thanks Guys! Appreciate the kind words.
Ha! We should all have such a heavy burden of matrimonial years. Let those crystaled, rosed co-workers smirk.
paid and laid
the never written, on the body--
I agree with Gary. Nice flow as well. Good work my friend!
Thanks Gary and Michael.
love the stuff where you use words to make me squirm in my seat and wonder what I'll be doing next Valentine's Day. Excellent launch into the lives of old sex fiends.
Thanks T. I love making you squirm!
Love this part:She will admire his finesse
as his earnestness tears apart
their young flesh
with rabid ferocity
scaring her into four powerful
orgasms that echo
his
Paid and laid, they leave.
Sensual and smooth and haunting.
thanks David!