far beyond
by Tim G. Young
far beyond the far beyond
sparkles the stars like sparkles
no shade to hide
no glimpse of death
only a long ride
to the wind
like you never knew
blow past the hollows
that shiver with the dark
return to form
ancient and new
pick your peace with history
don't remove what you can't see
rest for a long time
taste the bitter fruit
and drink deeply
the questions will surround you
by night the answers
slip into the abyss
haven't i met you once before
far beyond the far beyond
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Good work, Tim. Enjoyed very much. *****
Especially these lines:
"blow past the hollows
that shiver with the dark
return to form
ancient and new"
Good music throughout. I like this piece.
Swept me along through the sparkles to the...far beyond.
Enjoyable read, I like the flow, I like how the end folds back to the start *
Swept me along through the sparkles to the...far beyond.
Sorry for the double tap. Wifi problems again today.
Wow. Thank you gentlemen, all.
Chris, Sam, Matt, and Fos!
"haven't i met you once before" Love this line. Such a fluid poem.
Haunting, lovely.
Sweet and kind and musical.
"pick your peace with history"
I especially like this line.
Nice work!
love the second to last line best*
(love the rest too)
Ladies and gentlemen, my heartfelt gratitude! Erika, Dianne, Darryl, Bill, and Beate.
I like this music *
Thank you, John.