Peace in the Backyard
by Tim G. Young
No lies in the sky
The clouds lay bare and quiet
My mind clear as air
The rabbit sits still
Birds fly soft in my vision
Silence in my ears
Dragonfly swoops by
Red bird sits so close to me
Sinking sun drifts down
Evening begins now
Sky blue blanket above me
Feelings change their hue
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"Feelings change their hue"
Really nice.
Nice sequence.
Thank you so much: Jerry, Erika, and Gary.
Reading these visions has me feeling peaceful.
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Mathew and Jill, many thanks!
Very nice set, Tim. I feel very ohm! *
Much appreciated. Thanks, Charlotte.
By God, there is still some sweetness in it all. Thanks, Tim.
Thank you Darryl, and we must continue to see it!
The last stanza. **
Rachna K, So many thanks.
*Mmmm. I'm spending more time sitting on my front stoop lately. Listening to birds or to the silence.
Thanks Nonnie. Yes, birds and silence have taken an important step into my life!
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Many thanks Bill.
Seems like our backyards are the only places to find peace these days. Nice, Tim.
Kitty, it is our sanctuary. Thank you!