Gem
I can see you in my mind
building new words to say,
as I'm spectating the fuse-box
of your little, embattled brain.
Tell me all the things you know already,
what you know that I don't.
My little gem,
I am proud and I am afraid
over how quickly you change shape,
at how fast our walls repaint,
how the years fold over and over.
Again, I am proud and I am afraid.
When you think of me
after me
I wonder what you will remember?
My little gem,
you are not mine now
but I feel you
all the same.
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Stone
I wonder if, at some point,
you will be like me,
but I do not know what that means
and I most want you to be you.
I feel like I should tell you
things about strength.
My stone
I am still discovering it myself
and it is a changing, tricky thing,
that you will have to learn to grasp.
I can't help you do that,
and we will battle when I try.
When you think of me
after me
what sort of man will you be?
My stone,
you are not mine now
but I feel you
all the same.
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on parenthood not yet realized
This has an Asian feel. The cadences, line breaks, the thoughts reduced to their essences. I also sense that it's built on some classically known form--that I don't give a hoot what that form might be called is a tribute to your use of it.
Nicely done.
Lovely