whistle stop
by Rene Foran
i should've been more
resistant to the pestering
a cornfield of ears
smiling
& tossing out
barbed wire
bon mots
good bye suckers
isolated soy protein tears
amber hankies wave
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Clever metaphoric porridge. *
"a cornfield of ears smiling
& tossing out barbed wire
bon mots"
I love this piece. Great closing image. Fine work.
Thanks, Mathew & Sam
This aptly sums it up.*
Thank you for reading, Amanda
Nicely done.
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Thank you Gary & Charlotte
Powerful and tight, spare and intense imagery. Nicely done, Rene! *