by Rene Foran
like a comet
with a beautiful tail
streaking through your orbit
a flirtation
out of reach
still you're winking out of habit
you're landscape
under her flight path, brother
one dash in a dotted line
one wish
in a billion of bedside whispers
cast into the sky
and she's gone
before you
know it
and all
you got is
what you saw
just a fleeting
frozen memory
unable to thaw
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Just lovely in visuals and execution. *
I like the play with sound at the end of each stanza. Nicely done. Also like the fact that imagery finds the grey area between abstract and physical.
Yup. Zzzzzip. Just like that. *
The world is littered with broken-hearted astronomists hoping for a glimpse and wanting more.