George remembered when Gwen first moved next-door — second grade - her brunette ringlets swung behind her as she explored her new home. They would eventually meet, shake hands, and agree to put a string with cups attached between their windows. George stayed up late every night, watching her bedroom light flicker on, her shadow float by the shade. No call.
They shared a lot through the years — a bus stop, acne, and first kiss stories. George was happy to be her confidant, good enough friends to help shoulder her burdens. But he wanted to push her curls back behind her ear and trace her soft cheek with his fingertips. He didn't.
She went to Michigan State and he went to NYU. On occasional Saturday nights (Sunday mornings) his instant messenger would pop up — “Hey, you.” They would chat until one of them passed out.
Gwen was engaged to some guy from college. Love. Marriage. Babies. George pushed on. Focused on work - corporate attorney — his other passion. An occasional Christmas card came.
Gwen moved into the assisted living apartment next to his. Her husband long passed. Her silver ringlets bounced as she hobbled around her new dwelling.
They played bridge and bingo. Saturday nights they danced in the hall. He walked her to her door and kissed her goodnight. He pushed her hair back behind her ear and traced her cheek with his fingertips.
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This was written for 52/250:Long Distance. Criticism is welcome.
Engenders a little ache in the heart.
Thank you, Larry.
love at last, love all along.
Waiting for the call that never came through the string between their windows. How I love this image!
This reminds me a lot of Thornton Wilder's Our Town. The two kids living in houses side by side; though the Wilder play progresses differently. I had a strong reaction to this story. Most people don't get another chance, but you let these two have it. Better late than never, right?
Very good story
Heartache indeed. Love at last indeed. Better late than never indeed. *
Thank you, everyone for commenting on this story.
at least they finally got together. It does'nt often happen to many. Glad he got to push back her ringlets.
Thanks, Estelle. I'm also glad he got that experience.
Good details here, Matt. I enjoyed reading this.
Thank you, Bill.
this is a good piece, Matt. Enjoyed.
Thanks, Sam.
I dig the manipulation of time in this, man. I almost drifted away while reading until you forwarded ahead and gave us that soft and wonderful end. Nice.
Thanks, Sheldon.