by Mathew Paust
Even the plethora of potential titles is dangerous--
alliteration obviously, for example,
sign of an amateur, except, of course
as an example.
Then again, all poets are amateurs,
all with day jobs
yet among the poets our elite must respect
those with hoi polloi celebration
are deigned the eyebrow arched in class distinction.
Yet it would seem if art's true value
is sublime surprise, and a lifting of spirit
across the species, both eyebrows
should salute those who do so,
salute them with unfeigned delight of friends.
And yet the elite and those aspiring to such height
can't seem to resist writing mainly for one another
baring inner whimsies and contradictions
with the cleverness of mystery writers
constructing puzzles only they expect to solve.
But back to perils of pandemic poetics,
in truth no different than others--
which words, which arrangements—No--start over
keep at it until something clicks, surprises,
brings something from deep within to life.
A friend today said, “I hate Emily Dickinson,” after posting
one of her poems on his Facebook page.
“Stream of consciousness, bah,” he went on.
Frankly, I, too, had trouble with “A Light Exists in Spring”
until, with a second reading, something clicked,
surprised me, brought something from deep within to life:
"A quality of loss
Affecting our Content
As Trade had suddenly encroached
Upon a Sacrament."
And I murmured, I think
“Holy shit!”
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This piece has about as close to a perfect ending as is possible. Made me think of Philip Larkin.
I like the way the loftiness of lines and phrasings unfold ..."But back to the perils of pandemic poetics"... to this moment:
"A friend today said, 'I hate Emily Dickinson,' after posting
one of her poems on his Facebook page.
'Stream of consciousness, bah,' he went on."
- which sets up that ending nicely.
Good poem.
Thanks, Sam. Mighty encouraging!
I'm fond of the ending here also, Matt.
For me, you could start the poem at "A friend..." and it would still work as a poem.
I understand, Bill.
Holy sh... as I mentioned elsewhere. *
:)
. . . . !! x
Your facility is much appreciated, Renée.
I enjoyed the meandering here and loved the digging at the end, alike for both reader and writer!
Thanks, Dianne. If it's not apparent this ending, and my inspiration, made my poem "found" (as I believe the cognoscenti would say). Looking back on it I believe my friend might been playing with irony, as the comment I left out, which followed the one I quoted, was "and she even screwed up the rhyme scheme!" My friend might not be an aficionado of verse, but I'm pretty sure he knows rhyming is no long de rigueur.
Hey Matt, nothing to do with your poem but can "sudden/suddens" ever be a verb? I'm asking for a friend. E.D. would prolly say yes.
Poetic license, as I understand it, is almost as powerful as a Papal encyclical in certain circles, Dianne. I know in Russian, nouns are verbalized frequently, e.g. clouds parted in the bluing midday sky. Your friend might have in mind something along the line of "the surprise deadline suddens her cognitive machinations, rendering her vulnerable to ignoranti suppositions she'd overindulged in the 'shrooms she'd pinched earlier from her friend's lunchbox..."
Yes! Exactly! How did you know?
"ignoranti"-- I'm using that too. I mean my friend...
lol Out of the mouths of babes...!
"Then again, the bulk of poets are amateurs."
True but who cares. They all have emotions to express.
That was my underlying point, Erika. The irony I see is that "serious" poets seem to develop a tribal consciousness that quietly shuns any of theirs who become too popular in the greater world. As if by such success tribal standards have somehow been compromised. As with all closed societies, rules rule. Form uber alles in this case. I can only imagine the silent rage Bukowski aroused crashing thru with the indifference of a drunken bull elephant. Oddly this disparity of sensibilities doesn't seem to be materially significant. As to amateur status, even Billy Collins kept his day job, but he's been dissed right here--not by name, of course, as the tribe, as I've observed, maintains a meticulously polite facade. Can you imagine the secret blood that would be spilled in a professional poetry slam backed by, oh, Bank of America?
Ooooweee! We should bow in gratitude before the Muse that no such thing is even remotely possible.
Thanks, btw, for the fave, the only currency in this venue for us humble word wranglers. Altho I daresay few, if any, would admit to such crass depravity.
I love the name, Emily.
Some deeper meaning,
There seems to be. *
Brave man, Tim. But, then, you're a survivor. ;)
*, Matt. The opening is strong and, in a way, says it all Even the plethora of potential titles is dangerous--
alliteration obviously, for example,
sign of an amateur, except, of course
as an example.
Thanks, David. Good to see you here!