by Mark Reep
Saturday morning, and I'm pushing the old truck a little, chasing retreating bands of cloud shadows along a winding hilltop road. Wide fields rolling away on either side, big clumps of raw earth not yet dragged, lush green hay already nearly ready for first cutting. They've worked the road again, smoothed out the ruts, but the new gravel's not packed down yet—Easy to get loose in this stuff, probably should back off a little. But it's been a week since I've seen you, and it's the first hot day of the summer, chance of storms later but none come to darken the dusty rearview mirror yet, just sunshine and blue skies and windblown cotton-candy clouds I can't catch or even keep up with, and all this afternoon, this weekend still in front of us, if I hurry.
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This was written for Parni. Published in Gloom Cupboard #63.
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Ah, those elusive weekends.
A neat little paragraph, and still I can see the countryside, feel the bumping truck, wonder what she looks like at the other end.
Nice piece of flash.
Your words are running, hurrying along - I could feel this poem, Mark.
You're very good.
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Wonderful flash, Mark!
Great imagery that matches the pace. Nice.
Chasing the dream. Love the way you make it seem urgent, hopeful.
Incredibly picturesque. This felt so broad but still so intimate. Something very mythic Americana about this piece.
I like the urgency in this. *