by Marda Miller
to eat
without fear
of it breaking me
to look in a mirror with open eyes
and see what everyone else saw
to live life on purpose
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Oh, wow. This is raw. Says so much with a frugality. Lovely.
"and see what everyone else saw"
You give us insecurity in the clearest way. *
Thank you so much Harley.
"to eat
without fear
of it breaking me"
Wow, this opening really got to me, so raw...
Simple poetic language that tells a lot about the human condition
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Takes nerve to write like this.
"to live life on purpose"
Yes.
Thank you so much Susan, James and Sam. This is probably the most open I've been about it. There is healing power in writing.
Clean & clear. Wish more people wrote with this directness. Very nice.
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powerful voice, and in its directness adds an added dimension to the mirror image, cracked glass set right, endeavoring to live without illusion *
I always appreciate and admire people who write openly and honestly. Excellent, Marda.
wow, I am humbled by all your comments here. Thank you Jack, Doug and Erin :)
this is heartfelt. brave and lovely.
Thank you for that Jen :)
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oh good Lord, yes!
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thank you Boudreau and Rene :)
greatness in this. *
Thank you for giving me my tenth fave on this Jules :)
Wow I am so humbled.
there is a great deal of power in this. *