taking work home with you
the sound of ashes
being poured in the kitchen
from plastic bag to urn
is indistinguishable
from waves washing
upon the beach.
being poured in the kitchen
from plastic bag to urn
is indistinguishable
from waves washing
upon the beach.
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Living with a funeral director.
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nice little image
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"idistinguishable"
toss an 'n' in there, dear - they is cheap!
:)
Suggest you submit this to www.ochreumber.com---after fixing the typo.
I can hear it.
Love it. *
A strange and very effective coupling.
Huh. Fix the missing "n," and this is a good 'un.
This took me there...made me hear it.*
Oh wow, haha! I wrote this piece and didn't think twice about it--I didn't even think to check back! Thank you very much for the kind remarks, everyone. I'll certainly submit it, Stephen, thanks for the suggestion!