When Lorelei emerged from the Bentley draped in pink silk and pearls, E.B. Whiting's heart quaked all the way down to his RocketBuster boots. For over a year he had pursued the Geisha, through the cobbled streets of the French Quarter to the high rises of Hong Kong. Rebuffed in every city, he paid for her best courtesans instead. The next morning, he sent her ivory roses, accepted but never acknowledged.
He strode across the foyer, Dom Perignon clutched in his hand. She followed him to the window. Below, the Dallas skyline glittered. American flags and Whiting banners floated ghostlike from dozens of cranes silhouetted in tiny white lights.
“You have built a kingdom,” she said.
“As have you.” They clinked flutes. “Have you considered my proposal?”
She rested the champagne on the table and took his hand. The subtle scent of vanilla wafted from her. He trembled as she splayed open his palm and traced the left side with her finger.
“Long career line. And success, but the two do not intersect.” She pulled his hand closer, her breath warm on his skin. “Love line also long, but see?” She drew quick perpendicular cross-hatches with her nail. He winced.
“Marry me,” he whispered. “Please.”
“Life line starts here.” She slowly trailed her forefinger from the base of the thumb to the middle of his palm, and stopped. A frown creased her forehead, then smoothed.
“Yes,” she said and smiled. “Let us marry.”
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Inspired by the 52/250 theme: palm of your hand.
Inspired as well by a recent evening spent with my graduate students dining at Emeril's in New Orleans. For fun, one read our palms -- I have a nice long life line.
Nice approach to the theme challenge, Linda. Enjoyed reading it 52|250. Good work.
Nice, Linda!
Oh, I love this. I love her saying "Let us marry." Nice one, Linda. *
yes to this. rich tapestry and a lot of heart. i like how this piece involves from the global to the local, towards a great intimacy.
52/250's bringing out some of your best, Linda.
Hmmm... I detect some dark undercurrent in that "Let us marry."
;-)
Good one. Reminds my of that song (can't remember the name but its about a fortune teller) in "Rising Sand," by Robert Plant and Alison Krauss.
Curiously wonderful.
All, thank you so much for your generous reads, I am always honored you take time to read my words and take time to comment. Peace...
Matt D, yes, dark indeed, and yes, mercenary ;^) Peace...
Susan, thank you. The 52/250 weekly theme has been my writing bootcamp. Responding to themes, and writing short, have never been mo strengths. Peace...
Matt H, Raising Sand. GORGEOUS album, and I am dating myself when I say I remember Allison Krauss as a 12 year old scrawny kid with a violin stuck under her chin, doing the folk circuit. Passim, Lowell, all that jazz...
Very nice, and a wonderful take on the prompt. Loved it even more on the second read. *
Kim, thank you for kind words and fav! Peace...
Yikes! Slam-bang ending. Very, very nice. *
Thanks Jack for the 'yikes!' and the fav - peace!