by Katie Moore
Back in the way back I would have been so unclean
that you would have treated me
like a Goddess or the womb of the world all
while thinking you were just locking me away
for your purity's protection. My blood
could get your soul dirty, and we all bled
together so you shut us all up together
and together we weren't silent at all, but laughing
behind our drawn tent flaps, silken screens,
locked doors. To touch our skin was filthy,
to spread our legs a mortal sin. You closed
the keyholes to keep us apart, so we used them
to keep you out and keep our secrets to ourselves.
Laughing, cramping, moaning, spinning rivers
and oceans of stories, spilling bowlfuls
bright with red, staining cushions. They were ours
to stain. Then. But now we get no rest within our wicked
week and work while our wombs cramp, most of us
not knowing to wish for the days of confinement,
the segregation of the sullied.
I spread my soiled self around the world.
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Published in THIS Literary Magazine May/June 2012!
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I absolutely love this. I have been wanting to write something about this very topic and just couldn't do it in a fresh way. You did! Kudos.
Wonderful; just wonderful.
I've long thought how we've seen the old customs too much through a filter of distortion--of, for example, 19th Century Judeo-Christian male anthropologists, who indeed saw segregation as their protection against wickedness, rather than our protection in the blessed retreat of a shelter of peace, honor, laughter, and rest.
My blood/could get your soul dirty
When I read that, i was all Definite fave. And the last line sealed it.
like a Goddess *
This is greatness, I tell you, greatness!*
It is indeed a poem, Katie. A fine poem
Magnificent and strangely lyrical. *
Marvelous.
Thanks for reading and even more for enjoying! I'm in love with this piece. It's rare when that happens, and awesome.
Powerful, Katie!! "You closed
the keyholes to keep us apart, so we used them to keep you out and keep our secrets to ourselves." An amazing poem!!! Big fave! ****
Wonderful poem, Katie. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. This is masterful use of language.
So glad you guys enjoy this piece!
Oh man, how did I miss this? Freaking amazing!
Fave. Fave. Fave.
"They were ours / to stain."
Excellent poem, Katie.
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Thanks, guys! *glowing*