Walking
by Jill Chan
There are many people
who can't walk.
Who don't have legs.
Who can't move.
Who are in pain.
Who are here
but are suffering.
Who are not here.
Who bring many things
but are taken.
Who take but love much.
Who are loved
but can't love back.
Who have a heart
but not the way to love.
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Truth can hurt.
I especially like the first line and the last four lines. Together, they make their own poem.
Thank you, Mathew, and Adam. You got that, Mathew. Thanks for the suggestion Adam.
"Who have a heart but not the way to love"
Thank you, Kitty. I'm glad you liked that line. I thought it was too cheesy.
The last 2 lines. <3
Thank you!
Agree with Adam.
Finding a way is never easy.*
Thank you, Bill, and Tim. Much appreciated.
I love the quiet loudness of this poem.
Thank you Reva. Your comment is really deep. Appreciate it.