Thanks for the Unsolicited Advice
by Jerry Ratch
And what is it I'm supposed to do
With all this unsolicited advice?
You're supposed to listen to it very carefully.
Before discarding it, you mean?
Exactly.
Now we're seeing things more
Eye to eye.
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1. Stop posting your entire work in the excerpt!
;-)
(success on the first one!)
2. Center your work.
3. Single-space your work.
--Unsolicitious Maximus
No way to top Mac's comments.
You're welcome. *