by Jerry Ratch
When bees die they die
with their wings straight out
They die of natural causes
and their tiny bodies are bent
as though landing on
a flower
Their wings seem
too big for them
and they lie scattered
about the floor, tilted
in dead positions
Now you have no
life, are tilted
forward that way
no noise from you
no danger in your stinger
no testimony
the way your body's bent
hunched up
singed with ecstasy
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from my 2nd book of poetry, CLOWN BIRTH
I like this very much. Very visual.
Jerry - Just what Matt said. Its perfect.
no danger in your stinger
no testimony
singed with ecstasy
from first reading to now, the ending resonates with my memories of the immolated Buddhist priests of the vietnam era.
Wow!