13. spring makeout haiku

tangerine mouthfeel
without meaning it, you got
grass stains on my heart

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Jake Barnes, Apr 15, 2014

It happens. *

Bill Yarrow, Apr 15, 2014

Yes.
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Sam Rasnake, Apr 16, 2014

Nice.

Carol Reid, Apr 16, 2014

Very springy!

Daniel Harris, Apr 16, 2014

Misses the Zen of haiku, but nice imagery. *

Gary Hardaway, Apr 16, 2014

Opening line is a treasure.

Jane Flett, Apr 16, 2014

Delicious tangerine kisses to you all!

Gary V. Powell, Apr 17, 2014

Yes.*

Mathew Paust, Apr 17, 2014

A healthy shot of yout'. Did I say "yout'?" Yeah, yout'. *

Jane Flett, Apr 18, 2014

"Yout'"? I am full of it. Thanks!

Larry Strattner, Apr 20, 2014

Ed Higgins, Apr 20, 2014

very fine--love "without meaning it." so zen!

Michelle Elvy, Apr 21, 2014

Ah so quirky and nice. And unexpectedly zen. I like that.
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David Ackley, Apr 21, 2014

A taste poem, like WCW. Nice.

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