by Jake Barnes
My wife was busy working in the yard. It was almost noon, and my stomach was growling. My wife volunteered me to go get a Subway sandwich. And, oh, get some bananas, too, from Safeway. She would do a big grocery run the following day, she said.
I zipped down Walnut in my truck and listened to the latest on the bombers on the radio. The younger one, the one they found in the boat, was still alive. I drove into the shopping center and walked to the store. I got bananas and then stood in line for half an hour while some woman haggled with a clerk. Then I discovered that I didn't have enough cash with me and had to pay with a credit card.
I returned to my truck with my bananas and some yellow flowers that I got for my wife. I buy her flowers because it makes her happy. We always have cut flowers in the house.
As I walked down to the Subway, I thought to myself that now, after the horror in Boston, everybody looks like a terrorist. We live in a multiracial community. There are Chinese, Indian, Middle Eastern, and white folks like me. Plenty of people with dark skin, lighter complexioned men with dark hair and black stubble beards.
I got my sandwich and walked back into the sea of cars and trucks, found mine, packed away my purchases, and drove off. As I negotiated an aisle of cars, I stopped and let a family cross in front of me. The man smiled and waved. Indian, I figured. At a stop sign a few yards further on, I stopped and motioned to the driver of a car full of light skinned, dark haired people, signaling them to go ahead. The car slowly, slowly eased into the intersection. One of the kids looked at me. I winked.
As I drove home, I thought how uneasy I had felt when I was out in public that day. I felt better later. When I got home I told my wife that everybody out there looked like a terrorist, but I had a solution for that, for how I felt.
“What's that?” she asked
I said be very, very nice to everybody.
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Current events. Aka "The horror, the horror."
"I said be very, very nice to everybody." It's the only way. *
I like this a lot. It's relevant, thought-provoking, and for me, the ending can be taken two ways. On the one hand, after the Newtown massacre it occurred to me that if the killer had run into one person who said something nice to him that day, would it have possibly broken the path he was on? And on the other, are we nice because it's a good thing to do or because we're afraid to set someone off?
Thanks, my friends. Well, Beate, it works for me. Really glad to get favs from both of you. You two are both among the elite writers on Fictionaut in my opinion. Happy trails.
That is the perfect solution. Also , if they are not nice back, that signals something. Our primitive survival skills. fv*
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The writing is so inviting and easy to follow. Your honesty really makes me think.
There's an easiness to your prose that's irresistible, and a good point in the end.*
Easy read. Good ending. What's not to like?