For My Sons, a Poem
by H. L. Nelson
In time, I will forget
how he said "smooshie" for "smoothie"
and "eyebrowns" for "eyebrows,"
how his upper lip dimpled when he laughed
in that uproarious, wild toddler way.
How he wheedled to be wrapped and rocked,
after a bath, even at age five,
his long calves uncovered by cloth.
How he teetered then between baby and boy,
how his hair still smelled of warm nursery.
But I will have this poem,
and I will have his shoulders, staunch,
ahead on the crumbling concrete,
my grandchild, his child, piggybacking,
grinning behind and beckoning.
Time does evaporate memories, but written word is indelible. Warm, cozy feeling in this piece. **
"and I will have his shoulders, staunch, / ahead on the crumbling concrete"
Good poem. Nice work.
Lotta love in this. *
Thanks, everyone! :) I alternated different memories about each of my boys in this.
Well written snapshot.*
Sweet and very well seen.
Thanks!
Beautiful. *
Thank you, Jake!
The ties of father to child are beautifully rendered in the remembered details.
Thanks, David!
Beautiful in every way.