by G.E. Simons
No Pulse
Threaded caps on thinning necks
Now sipping sups drips spiraling
Eat breaded meats on knees from decks
With metallic tangs of a fibred tongue
All Junk
Shredded plasma in faintly veins
The pugilist has lost his punch resistance
So I swap the car for boots and trains
Or sleep in hotels as my blood groups up in sequence
No Redemption
Anvils spill from sheds onto dirt
The luxury of rentals in an equestrian corner
We ate at our table, broke bread, drank wine
She collected the fallen, the spruce and the pines
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You know like how everybody goes on about everything these days...
I like the music of the words. *
Interesting language throughout.
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I like the rhythm and the focus on imagery and aesthetic over the gritty (possible) subtext.*