Phenomenology
by Gary Hardaway
After Sunset
The crescent moon cannot illuminate
the dark of after sunset. Shadows hide
among themselves. The real disguises itself
within the night's evasions. The daylight's fine
distinctions disappear. The world is lost.
The phantom sounds emerge, untraceable.
Without the light, nothing can be known
with any certainty. The eyes demand
the sharp distinctions of shade and shadow,
bright and dark. The shapes are lost amid the swirl
of black uncertainty. One cannot find
the way back or forward. One is dismayed
among conjoined deepened darknesses.
What blind men suffer, day and night,.day
and night, reveals itself in terrifying clarity.
A Murmuration
of trash and fallen leaves
swirls in a whirlwind up
and around, bends
groundward to collapse
in a scatter of castoffs
covering the spidering cracks
of the decrepit cul-de-sac.
Cosmogony
The universe is churn-
everything in motion,
everything in a process
of becoming something else.
There is no rest.
There is only tumult and collision,
disparity of heat and light,
a kaleidoscope of refraction and reflection.
I am exhausted by awe.
I'm exhausted by awe of these three poems. You're hitting them out of the park lately, Gary.
Thank you, Matt.
Not one wasted word. I love all three.
Thank you, Dianne.
"everything in a process
of becoming something else."
So true and so beautifully written.
All three are astounding. 'Cosmogony' needs to be memorized for silent recitation throughout the day. Well done, Gary.
Thank you. Erika.
Than you. Joey.
"in a scatter of castoffs"
Fine writing, Gary!
"I am exhausted by awe."
Outstanding! (Consider as a refrain)
"exhausted by awe" - that makes two of us. *
Thank you, Bill.
Thank you, Beate.
*
Thank you, Gary.
"everything in a process
of becoming something else."
An (maybe the) ultimate truth.
Good group, Gary.
Thank you, Sam.
*., Gary. Sam is on it. I really like where you are taking this poetry. "A Murmuration" is such fine verse.
Thank you, David.
Damn !!
*****
Thank you, James.