Monday
by Ed Higgins
Always in a hurry
to spoil your
weekend
Monday
morning
bursts in
like a
home
invasion
thug
brandishing
6 AM
as a
stropped
razor
to your
still
unshaven
face.
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Author's Note
Up on Ascent Aspirations Magazine’s "Friday’s Poems" site for Oct. 17, 2017. Cracked me up when they took “Monday” for Friday’s Poems—the editor apparently has a wry/ironic side.
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Resting is fleeting.*
Wry all around. Got me nodding and laughing. The verticality works, too.
I like the title and the "unshaven/face".
Nice.
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(Go for the hard ending. "Neck" or "cheek" for example, are stronger than "face.")
Yes!
*Even if you don't shave!
Nice merging of form and content!
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