by Ed Higgins
honey
she said
with a wink
and a twinkle
both subtle
and splendid
tilting her
head
while wiggling
her fine bourbon
ass
just a
little
you're only
a slice
away
from this
heavenly
French
dish.
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In the current issue of Red River Review, Nov. 2013, p. 39,
Don't recall how the poem came about exactly, but surely a riff on the "Let them eat cake" quote (which she probably never said).
yum yum *
I love that "only a slice away". Sweet poem with a touch of bourbon!
A most agreeable title.
Seductive.*
Strong way to close. Good poem.
Finally read the author's note and made the connection...
;-)
(and think it's deeper than its simplicity implies)
"with a wink
and a twinkle
both subtle
and splendid"
Great!
thanx, all--this was a fun poem to have written, always makes me smile! Gotta love your own stuff, of course.
A lot of fun. The short breaks give this a clever little melody, and I appreciate the grim double meaning of the last stanza of this poem.
Fun. *
Sexy and light-well done.
"Her fine bourbon ass" conjures so much. *******fav by far