I suppose it was inevitable,
This crashing of souls,
This recognition
of possibility to create.
If we were younger,
We would make a baby,
The ultimate act of faith.
Now it has to be something else,
Nothing to force a track
with night feedings,
report cards,
button up your sweater and eat your spinach…
I sense an alignment of stars brought this on,
A wiping clean of all fictions,
And I am licking my own face
Searching for traces of you.
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"I suppose it was inevitable,
This crashing of souls,
This recognition
Of possibility to create."
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Lovely.*
nice use to syntactical breaks. beautiful last two lines.
Worth waiting for, the ultimate splendor. *
Thanks for your comments, Rachna, Amanda, Loren and Mathew. I love hearing from so many talented writers...
Star!
"And I am licking my own face
Searching for traces of you."
A subtle way to put it. *
Enjoyed.
Thank you Tina, Daniel and Gary...
"I suppose it was inevitable, / This crashing of souls"
Beautifully said!
Thanks Bill!