by Darryl Price
The first thing I realized I was hearing
when I woke up from the land of nowhere was
the brittle sounds of little frozen rods of
rain crashing into the sliding glass porch doors
relentlessly and cracking into tiny
shards of split piles in the bare bulb light of new dawn.
I don't know why this scene of tiny frozen
lakes all cracking in unison entered my
glowing brain like that but it made a perfectly clear and
beautiful sense to me. I was back and
I had nothing else to focus on but this
song of melting wind chimes blowing all around me. I felt thankful.
Right now I've been watching it snow for hours and
I get that same feeling. Then I turned on the key to myself.
I'd been sleeping on the couch, but I knew
what was being said. You're not done yet. You've still
got the gift of listening to it rain. That snowy beat's
ancient music's being carried on inside of you. It carries the sense of the real
you. You must use this sound out loud. Pay it forward. Keep the
snow's language alive. Find a way. Speak like snow, as snow, for all snow.. And so, on behalf
of the rain and myself may I request
the honor of your presence at this poem today.
Darryl Price Friday, January 25, 2013
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At first you know you can't identify what you know, because your knowing has been asleep as well, but slowly you begin to make sense out of things being present--all of which brings you round to yourself of course. Water in many of its forms speaks a kind of awakening language that matches something deeper inside. It stirs us. I was stirred, happily, in this particular instance.
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nice work Darryl.
like very much:
the bare bulb light of dawn
secondly, the idea of the rain as inspiration or such
but these three words are the inspirational and perfectly put: Find a way.
nice all around...
I'm honored. Beautiful imagery. Fave*
"You've still
got the gift of listening to rain."
Beautiful. I'm glad for this poem and you. *
Great closing stanza, DP. Good piece.
A very eloquent invitation. Thank you.