believed in us.
could last. We
harder. I, personally,
that way. What
you then. I've
always loved you.
friend. Goodbye, old
friend. Weren't we
a poet. What
with us. Still
on leaves. And
I could tell you what I'm trying
to say, but you wouldn't believe
me; even if I wasn't still
trying to do anything but
write a poem. That's the point at
which realization starts to
feel something like a piece of art.
When the thing isn't obvious,
because it's so obvious that
it's mysterious and strange and
totally wonderful, all at
the same time. And that time is, well,
organic and seamless, if you
know how to be in its perfect
presence. Meaning that you will meet
another living essence, some
call it the Muse, in its own sea
environment, while standing in
your own. Say hello. In that sense,
it's like looking in a mirror
at another state of fragile
memory. We will do this to
celebrate all that is. We do
this to dip our toes into the
creative currents and heal our
wounded open eyes. We do this
to speak and to listen and to
converse without dishonesty
as our primary guide. We want
to be ourselves, even in our
boldest dreams. But, of course, you must
be careful. Many criminal
minds have also learned to open
this door. So it's always good to
have a song or two with you to
remind you of who you always
are when you are just being you.
That way you don't ever have to
be afraid of meeting danger.
You'll know the choices you will make
before you are forced to make them,
because they are the deepest you.
And you are never alone in
that sacred place, because a time
of love includes everybody
everywhere, and, as John put it,
you know that for sure. Here, come on,
say it with me, I love you so.
"more of everything growing
everywhere. Mushrooms, ferns and
lit butterflies navigate
the leafy floor with beauty
and tremendous grace."
Really connect with the dense phrasing throughout. This gives the poem a certain heat.
The closing, for whatever reason, made me think of Sam Cooke's "A Change Is Gonna Come" -
"the blundering thoughtlessness
of the wise, who prefer to
count the spilled stars forever
rather than love their fellow
men and women"
Good poem, DP. I like it.
"And the forest
now has given me the gift
of a living electric
silence."
"It's the heart, crumpled
to one sorrow like ten thousand
cigarettes."
Beautiful poems, Mr. Price.
A fool no more! *
A wise man rather than a fool...
"the forest // now has given me the gift / of a living electric / silence"
*
"We believed in
everything and everything
believed in us." *
(I'm wishing we could go back.)
Good work*