the large snowflakes
fall gently
onto my exposed
flu-ridden head
my 102.2 degree heat
melts each one
adding to the poisonous
liquid within me
bare-footed Jesus
greets me on Delancey Street
and coughs in my face
the lights of the Williamsburg bridge
glitter with wet stars
all lined up
and the whiter ones must lead up
to a heaven
Jesus puts out a smoke
crushing it into the snowy pavement
his barefoot twisting the life from it
as vapors escape out from under his
wife-beater tank top, just under the arm pit.
I cough
I reach
for the
Williamsburg lights.
I like the illumination in the fourth stanza; it brings the entire poem together.
I believe I met Bare-Foot Jesus years ago...
;-)
Very nice... Just on the edge of fever dream...
lovely, feverish, shimmering
*
Good portrayal of a mild feverish delirium.