by Bill Yarrow
Man:
What a tree you are! Look at your girth, your spread, your leaves.
Look at your talented branches, your perfect bark. Even your roots
are not hidden from our view. Like May dolphins in the Indian Ocean,
they peek playfully from the ground, signs of stolid accomplishment.
O what a marvelous tree you are. Amazing tree! Outstanding tree!
Tree:
I don't think I can stand up straight one second more. My roots are
exhausted. My bark feels dead. My branches have advanced in so
many ill-considered directions, I am lost in the map of their ancestry.
I am constricted by rings. The weight of self crushes me. Woodpeckers,
worms, spider mites, and scullery bugs crave my pulp. I long to fall.
Lightning:
I will strike the tree and smash it. It will splinter under my sharp fist.
It will topple. It shall not stand. All its branches will lie in horrifying squalor.
History:
I have photographed the tree in its infancy, maturity, old age, and decline.
Now, I will photograph the tree in its demise, upended in swart disarray.
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A version of this poem appeared in the March 2011 issue of Negative Suck.
Thank you, Jeff Callico!
The poem appears in Pointed Sentences (BlazeVOX, 2012).
I love this, Bill. Great job!
Thanks, Robert. Something a little bit different!
Bill, I'm sure you meant "farther" rather than "father" and I'm still trying to figure it out. Very different and intriguing. . .
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"The Tree is Farther to the Man."
Just another of my literary jokes. Wordsworth: "the child is father of the man."
Also title of Blood, Sweat, and tears album:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Child_Is_Father_to_the_Man
Thanks, MaryAnne!
And so it goes. Maybe if the tree saw a shrink that would help. Seems he/she is lacking in self esteem. *
Bill, love the personification and perspective of this poem. It feels almost mythological, and definitely metaphorical. Fave.
"...swart disarray." SWART!!!!!
Damned Frisian thing to say, that.
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"...scullery bugs crave my pulp." And "swart". You just transported me to some other era. Love this. Peace *
Great form and phrasing, Bill. Good connections at work here. Really like the tree section.
The copy line, "I am constricted by rings" put me in mind of Norman Maclean's A River Runs Through It. The final line is "I am haunted by waters." I like this, Bill.
Excellent. Loved this. I have a tree who feels like this in my back yard.
Outstanding, Bill. *
Hi, Bill. The tree is obviously a fan of Emerson's: "Sweet is death forevermore...." It is more human than several persons I know. I like this. *