by Bill Yarrow
Ed Raglan was a spoiled banana no one wanted to touch. Inexcusably bruised,
the kid turned rotten, descending into dice and mash and reds and chew.
I couldn't understand anything he said. Like "My car has acne."
He means rust, my father explained. Like "I want surgery
for dinner." He means takeout said my mom.
I flexed my ego. I dismissed him
as unlettered, a no account,
a rube. My arrogance was
raging and rancid.
The condescension of a thirteen-year-old punk has no peer.
Thank God we don't stay thirteen forever.
I thought my neighbor—drug addict, alcoholic,
tobacco addict, gambling addict—a total failure.
What of my own addictions? Who am I to judge him?
I thought my neighbor unsophisticated. No acquaintance
with literature or art, ignorant of any kind of culture or class.
Turns out he thought in metaphor, which Aristotle calls genius.
I thought that a banana that had turned black from age was garbage.
Turns out that sour milk and black bananas make the best banana bread.
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This poem was published in Meta/Phor(e)/Play.
This poem appears in THE VIG OF LOVE (Glass Lyre Press 2016).
"Thank God we don't stay thirteen forever."
Teared me up a tad, Bill. Love the form, too.
Love the form and the last line. Good fun.
Wonderful! Great, original metaphors and a surprise twist! Aristotle line adds a perfect touch of depth. Perfect.
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Wonderful poem.
Thank you, Matt, Erika, Dianne, Jerry, and Gary!
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*, Bill. I like the way that this exceptional poem brought together an unusual confection with a surprisingly good results.
Thank you, Jenny and David!
The condescension of a thirteen-year-old punk has no peer.
Bravo. Stars in your crown. *
The center is granite-carved truth. Yes. Good poem.
*Marvelous poem and now I have to make some banana bread.
Thanks, Gita, Sam, and Nonnie!
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"This poem was published in Meta/Phor(e)/Play." Talk about a good fit!
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Thanks, Ray!