by Bill Yarrow
I can still hear
the shriek
of the Laughing Lady,
the crash
of a bucket of dimes,
the waves
against the jetty at noon
I can still see the boardwalk
empty with cyclists at 8 am,
at noon
clogged with seagulls,
at midnight
crowded with the ghosts
of sleeping old people
I can still hear
the whir of rusted tackle
on a new marlin boat,
the drip of cherry syrup
onto a cone of crushed ice,
the scream of teens
dizzy for foam dice
I can still smell the greed
of the hard sell,
fresh cigar ash in the sea,
the mildewed freezer
in the dirty pool hall,
the vinegar stink
of peanut-oil fries
I can still hear
the sinister click
of Zippo lighters,
the Chesterfield voices
of the Pokerino widows,
the oily patter
of pock-faced shills
I can still taste the flounder chowder
served by hairnet waitresses
to foul-mouthed barbers
at City Lunch
while in the alley
black men carted ice
on their naked backs with tongs
But most on sun-starved nights
I smell the foaming
German shepherds
locked in cages
under the pier
and the unworldly perfume
of the pony-tailed girl
who played alone with darts
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A version of this poem (entitled "Penny Arcadia") appeared in 2009 in new aesthetic as part of a seven-poem e-book entitled "The Perfume of The Pony-Tailed Girl Who Played Alone with Darts"
My father owned and ran a penny arcade on the boardwalk in Ocean City, Maryland from 1947 to 1977.
A version of this poem appears in POINTED SENTENCES (BlazeVOX, 2012).
Ah, Bill. Maybe it's because I'm from MD and I can hear, feel, smell, see all this in the penny arcade, too, but this resonates. The images come so quick, I love the busy-ness of them, how they fly at you, how they make noise like a pinball machine, bouncing and banging and bumping up against each other. I can't say which verse I like best, but it all rings true: the waves on the jetty, the sinister click of Zippos (love that!), the drip of cherry syrup, the white waitresses with white hair serving white food on white plates while black men deliver ice with tongs... and those smells, yeah, they are alive too. I am there when I read this. (I wish I had ital here: I want that to read: I am there!)
Really intense sensory experience here--love it. It touches also on history and social topics (stanza 5) but with such delicacy. Nice.
I like the attention to the senses here - good imagery - and it's the form that makes it work. Good piece.
Close to perfection, as close as I can judge. The penny arcade was a magical place to my young mind in the days before TV and computers. Memories retain the magic. Which your poem rekindles.
So nice, Bill. The imagery’s wonderful, and it means even more having read the note above about your father. The poem’s full of life – I can see many stories jumping out from this piece!
Precise, evocative images. Transports me. I wish I'd known a few years back about those foaming German shepards in cages under the pier.