by Ann Bogle
Story: “Man goes to store, buys cauliflower, leaves.”
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“Man goes shopping, buys cauliflower, leaves.”
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That is a six-word story. Notice that the meaning does not change with the word count. Syllabic count: pentameter (ten). Keep these commas.
“A man shops for cauliflower, returns.”
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Notice that the action changes little from version to version. Syllabic count: pentameter.
What makes it a story and not only a sentence?
“Mangoes leave shopping for cauliflower.”
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What makes it a stor(m)y and not only a sentence? What makes it a s-or(r)y and not only a sentence?
The vividity of the reader's imagination. *
Thanks from the ♥, Matthew!
*, Ann. This is such a smart, inventive piece.
Thanks, David. Here I'll post the Facebook thread related to it, that I set as public:
https://www.facebook.com/annbogle/posts/10152895002804635
Cauliflower man leaves. Fun and stuff that makes you think.*
Words whipped into magic. Playful and smart, Anne.*
Thanks, folks!
Cauliflower man leaves at last! It is fun to watch the word play with this small exercise.
Great, Ann! Reminds me of Queneau's Exercices de style.