Quite frankly you are ruining my life.
I know you don't mean to, but you are.
Like a car accident your face appears
out of nowhere when I close my eyes
and you collide into me, your body
heavy on mine and your breath warm
on my face. I spend hours sitting alone
just because I cannot function like this.
My hormones are going crazy. I cry
in the kitchen for hours. I try to think
of different reasons of why I may be
going hysterical: Baby seals are dying
in Canada. There is a rebellion in Syria.
A lot of stuff is going down in Africa.
While taking a dump today I stayed
on the toilet until my family went
searching for me, thinking I ran away.
I wish I could. You and I to some place
without cable TV or highways.
Maybe somewhere with a view.
You won't be interested, though.
I am such an ugly boy. I drown
in my own loneliness, choke
on my own disgusting habits.
You'd do no better. I've been practicing
for the rest of my life, and
I am still no good.
I just like thinking about you.
At least I have that. And poetry.
I write about you, and my words
immortalize your beauty, forever
incorruptible so long as ink
is in supply and people can read.
Sometimes I eat my feelings,
sometimes I write them down.
That is why I am fat,
and that is why I am a writer.
You are my muse.
When I miss you, I eat.
When I miss you, I write.
Both I probably do too much.
Really enjoyed. Sad and funny. *
Flat out hilarious! Big fav.
Wow,I thought this was written by a woman until the fourth stanza. You really nailed the situation with humor and insight.
Very well done. The beginning captured my attention and the ending left me no option but to read it again.
Sort of a fractured fairytale of Shakespeare's "Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer's Day" in parts. An ars poetica that includes a growing arse:
"So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee." *
Another thoughtful, well made piece.
This is close to home:
Sometimes I eat my feelings,
sometimes I write them down.
That is why I am fat,
and that is why I am a writer.
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Really good writing and I especially liked the stanza flagged up by Steven Gowin, and the one that comes after that. *
I like the honesty in this. This is ballsy writing. *
Sad and wonderful *