by strannikov
month without a moon
what blight on the souls of children born this month!
a month with no moon is not common at all,
no moon full for this February—alas!
they'll be thrown off for years, if not for their lives
(ahhh, if only this could have been a leap year!).
hard to say what calendar reform could do—
the Year of the Dog is now well underway
—but still, this February gets no full moon!
when a month can't accommodate a full moon,
something somewhere is amiss: but if the cat
can fiddle without dish eloping with spoon—
coastal Bermuda summers
the summer days of one Carolina youth:
dew melts in the sun of the next field for work
astride steel trailers jolting with bales of hay.
driven to the fields red Ford pick-up aroar
at no less than forty along rutted roads
with us on the back no matter the road's shape
or rattles and kicks galore with windows down
drove me through the best four summers of my life.
what could make baling twenty-five tons of hay
a day—its mem'ry—such a pleasure today?
(why would I ask myself? I'd be sure to lie.)
= = = = =
her beautiful toilet
grass waves blue by a river blue.
in a willow garden lush shade
drapes dark the young woman's small house
with the lone window, the white door.
the beauty powders her face red
lightly lightly with her white hand.
after the courtesans' house—here,
ignored wife of dissolute lout,
absent, missing dissolute lout
who left behind an empty bed.
the friends' leavetaking
where the peaks north of town turn blue
from where their white water bends east—
that spot is where we both depart:
one, dry grass blown ten thousand miles,
mind and soul of an aimless cloud,
the other, too sad for sunset.
hands barely get lifted in wave:
two horses neigh, turn heads, take paths.
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The first addresses a cosmic conundrum of February 2018.
The second: "coastal Bermuda" is no beachfront in the sub-tropical Atlantic but the name of the hay being baled.
The third and the fourth are likely the last two I will base upon Fenollosa's notes found in the back of the NDP centennial ed. of Pound's Cathay (renewed thanks to Zhaoming Qian for the excellent transcriptions).
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Great closing to "month without a moon":
"if the cat
can fiddle without dish eloping with spoon—"
Nicely done.
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Strong, effective blend of visual and sound throughout "coastal Bermuda summers".
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Especially like the discordant music in these lines in the Fenollosla pieces:
"drapes dark the young woman's small house
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after the courtesans' house—here,
ignored wife of dissolute lout"
&
"hands barely get lifted in wave:
two horses neigh, turn heads, take paths"
Great set, Edward.
Lyrical and persuasive.
I hit the wall at the Author's Note, thinking this would be far too esoteric for me to absorb. But it's not. It's pretty damned good!
Especially piquant this: "ignored wife of dissolute lout,
absent, missing dissolute lout
who left behind an empty bed."
fresh but as usual uniquely yours. cheers.
Awww...Edward...always unique, always enjoyable.
Liked esp. the "coastal Bermuda summers'--altho as a summer farmer myself I prefer brome, timothy, and red clover in my hay!
These three, but especially 2 and 3 fold well in me.*