by Rene Foran
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"whisper to me / of smoked paprika sunsets"
"for one last breath" would suffice and with greater effect.
A fine piece, Rene.
Excellent. Agree with t;he comment by Gary. Maybe could do without "screaming." "*"
It's fine the way it is.
The sunsets are screaming, she isn't.
*You're so good at this.
paprika sunsets. *